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May 12, 2009

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Sujewa

That selective focus thing u r doing with video is interesting. Done in post?

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Nicole/MadlabPost

Nice movie. I really like what you have done with the imaging.

Nicole/MadlabPost

My bad, I meant to say "imagery", not imaging.

James

DISCLAIMER: I am not trying to be mean at all - this is an opinion of a professional trying to help)

I'll say this as nicely as possible, being a producer (not a home-grown, backyard wanna-be) I would never, ever, show this to a soul. I would go into greater details as to why this is the pinnacle of why filmmaking should be left to professionals, however I believe there is a character limit.

What's the story?

If there's no story - that's fine, but WHY am I spending my time watching this?

The "Tilt-Shift" EFFECT, was basically - what - a blur vignette and some super saturation in Final Cut Pro? I guess at least you didn't use iMovie, that's a plus at least.

My personal favorite was the really long shots (if you cut down all the worthless seconds spent on various random shots of San Francisco and just used the footage that attempts to tell us the story - it would be 5 minutes long.) To top it off you didn't even cut out the sound of you handling your camera for those shots... I mean please?

Rather than tell you how awesome it is - I'm going to encourage you to actually do some pre-production, write a script, plan your shots, and give us something worth watching. Otherwise you're just a hack - not a filmmaker.

Reid Gershbein

Awesome! Thanks so much for posting James! It's great to get lots of different opinions. Thanks a lot for watching my artistic piece and I'm glad that you had such a strong opinion of it. Fantastic!

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